01.28.09

The Sunflower Seed

Posted in Uncategorized at 12:52 am by Miracle ♪♫

“Would Chekhov have suffered writer’s block?” Maria wondered, as the hull of the sunflower seed snapped open between her lightly clamped teeth.

Had it not been for gravity and absentmindedness, it might have appeared like a final attempt of helpless rebellion as the kernel fled in its nakedness, first escaping through Maria’s lips and slipping straight into the narrow entrance of a cowl-necked blouse, lapsing between two mounds of mysterious bosomy matter, and finally shelving itself in the black hole of the navel. There, cradled in the darkness was the sunflower seed, and it knew not what parallel or different fate it would have encountered had it slipped inside - on the other side, of that warm, heaving skin. At that moment, it knew not time nor space, it only knew of warmth, suspension, and a false feeling of relief.

Maria’s eyes swept the floor but found no trace of the seed, so she picked up another one when suddenly, an idea! A writing idea after weeks of creative standstill! She mock-kissed the second sunflower seed with glee and tossed it back on the table. “If Chekhov could eye an ashtray and tomorrow furnish a story called ‘The Ashtray,’ what tales I could conjure from a sunflower seed!”

With confident strokes of her pen she inked ‘The Sunflower Seed’ on the top of a blank sheet, and Maria wrote;

“Would Chekhov have suffered writer’s block?” Alejandra wondered, just as the sunflower seed snapped open between her semi-clenched teeth.

Of what seemed as a definitive act of impetuous rebellion, the seed fled in its nakedness, first escaping through Alejandra’s lips and slipping straight into the abyss of a cowl-necked blouse, lapsing between two mounds of mysterious bosomy matter, and at last shelved itself in a black hole which was the navel. There, cradled in the darkness was the sunflower kernel, and it knew not what parallel or different fate it would have encountered had it slipped inside - on the other side, of that warm, heaving skin. At that moment, it knew not time nor space, it only knew of warmth, suspension, and an ersatz feeling that resembled belongingness.

Maria continued to write vigorously and narrated how Alejandra’s husband discovered the mutinous seed in her bellybutton later that night and punished it by plopping it into his mouth with a teasing gleam in his eyes.

Pleased with the South American tone of absurdity in her story despite aiming for a Russian shade, and unaware that her tale was half fiction-half accidental truth, she put her pen down with a satisfying staccato. “Ah, the sound of a period!” she exclaimed. As she stood up, the sunflower seed fell to the floor, later to be identified as midnight snack by the little mouse that lived in between Maria’s walls.

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Note: Sketches categorized under "AbsurDom" are but fifteen-minute stray thoughts.
Do not try to make sense of this.
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4 Comments »

  1.    mika said,

    January 28, 2009 at 9:51 pm

    the form reminds me of those drawings of a staircase that ends where it begins. very interesting!!!

    wahaha, sorry, i can’t help but try to search for meaning in the midst of ‘absurdity’. but i’ll try not to. *mind starts chugging away, anyway* :P

    thanks for sharing your stray thoughts in the form of a story! it’s amazing that it took you 15 minutes. it would take me hours and hours to write something like that!

  2.    Miracle ♪♫ said,

    January 28, 2009 at 10:34 pm

    Mika, let me give you a hint about the structure (yes, let’s believe there is one haha). “Souvenir de Porto Rico.” ;-)

    Honestly, the formulation of the stray thoughts happened in the shower for about 10 minutes. It was the actual typing that took 15 minutes, and boy, did I type really fast in order to catch the ideas before it faded! This morning I also came back to the entry and altered a few words… so all in all, it was really circa half an hour.

    While you may not find meaning in the story, your pursuit itself may have meaning. Isn’t that a fragment of “Absurdism” after all? Hehe =P

    Thanks so much for bothering to read this and leave comments even with the augmented hassle for Friendster commenters.

  3.    grace said,

    February 3, 2009 at 8:37 am

    ah but this is brilliant. at least now we have online notebooks to write these stuff on. in a few years they’ll make even more sense, that is if friendster doesn’t crash and burn and if the world doesn’t end in 2012

  4.    Miracle ♪♫ said,

    February 3, 2009 at 6:09 pm

    Thanks so much, Ma’am. =)
    Haha That’s true, and it would be so interesting to witness what the future of blogging would be like. If the world doesn’t end yet, let’s just hope dear old Friendster has a bright future, too. hehe

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